July 30. To inject uplifiting vibrations into writing...

To inject uplifting vibrations into whatever you write, try to perfect the word-sequences. These will “work” best if they follow the natural flow of thought. Read each sentence over and over carefully, to ensure the achievement of this flow. Re-position words, phrases, and clauses as necessary for increasing clarity. For instance, in an earlier version of a sentence for July 25 in this book I wrote, “Isn’t it in your interest to offer him your sincere friendship in return?” I changed it to read: “It will be more in your interest to offer him, instead, your sincere friendship.” This change places the most important words, “sincere friendship,” at the end, making those words linger on in memory. When you do this work for your readers, they will benefit more greatly from what you have to offer them.

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