DZ-116: Writing Physical Comedy

Listen to learn how formatting--white space, caps, dashes--becomes your comedy toolkit without a director.

Mel joins Chas to tackle physical comedy. We limited our homework selection to extended scenes (as opposed to moments and sight gags) in live action projects and – with the help of our Patreons – selected early sequences from BRINGING UP BABY, the pilot for HAPPY ENDINGS and that wonderful food poisoning scene in BRIDESMAIDS.

We discover how these incredible writers take their time (on the page) to set up geography, framing and running gags. We also get tips on judicious use ALL CAPS, ellipses and M-dashes to recreate visual gags… and when to just let a paragraph go long and draw attention to itself.

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"The words on the page and the repetition are mimicking the edit, so we can visualize the humor and the repetition of it." — Chas Fisher @ 00:19:03

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CHAPTERS

• 00:00:00 – Cold Open
• 00:00:19 – Writing Physical Comedy: Scope, Constraints, and Homework Selection
• 00:03:55 – › Defining screwball, farce, and slapstick as distinct forms
• 00:06:52 – › How three case studies represent different slapstick approaches
• 00:10:27 – BRINGING UP BABY
• 00:15:04 – › Slug lines as editing rhythm and geography
• 00:18:15 – › Repetition in action lines mirrors physical comedy beats
• 00:22:31 – › Camera direction versus character eyeline to frame visual gags
• 00:28:20 – › Script-to-screen reordering of physical comedy sequences
• 00:31:44 – Thank you, Arc Studio Pro!
• 00:34:34 – HAPPY ENDINGS PILOT
• 00:38:53 – › How tone is established through action lines and formatting
• 00:44:09 – › Setting up running gags early to fuel later physical beats
• 00:54:59 – › Directing the camera on the page to control comedic framing
• 00:58:15 – BRIDESMAIDS
• 01:02:11 – › Framing the BRIDESMAIDS food poisoning scene setup
• 01:08:00 – › How action lines build and escalate physical comedy on the page
• 01:20:03 – › When setup earns dialogue-only visual comedy
• 01:27:31 – Key learnings
• 01:33:56 – Thank you amazing Patreons!

FILMS

• BRIDESMAIDS (2011) — (w) Annie Mumolo, Kristen Wiig (d) Paul Feig
• BRINGING UP BABY (1938) — (w) Dudley Nichols, Hagar Wilde, Hagar Wilde (d) Howard Hawks
• GAME NIGHT (2018) — (w) Mark Perez (d) John Francis Daley, Jonathan Goldstein

SHOWS

• HAPPY ENDINGS 1x1 "Pilot" — Anthony Russo, Joe Russo (d), David Caspe (w)

SCRIPTS

• Study the script: BRIDESMAIDS (2011) — Annie Mumolo, Kristen Wiig
• Study the script: BRINGING UP BABY (1938) — Dudley Nichols, Hagar Wilde, Hagar Wilde
• Study the script: GAME NIGHT (2018) — Mark Perez

SHOT ZERO DEEP DIVES

• Small and Large Physical Comedy: BRINGING UP BABY
• The Game of the Scene - GAME NIGHT
• ▶ How is this oner from GAME NIGHT so seamless?

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• DZ-16: Masters of Time and Whitespace

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