DZ-119: Final Character Choices & Great Endings

Listen if you want to understand how to better dramatise a character's internal journey

In this episode, Stu and Chas focus solely on the final choices made by protagonists and how that reflects their character journey and successfully, or not, dramatises the internal.

We compare and contrast different uses of narrative POV in respect to these final choices. And in particular whether and when the audience is made aware of the options available to the character, the act of making the choice, and the consequences of the choice.

We breakdown examples from DUNGEONS & DRAGONS: HONOR AMONG THIEVES, FINDING NEMO, MICHAEL CLAYTON, PROMISING YOUNG WOMAN and TALK TO ME.

As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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"A character has to make the most difficult decision of their life, and it becomes the crisis because each alternative poses a loss as well as a gain. And so, therefore, characters have to weigh what really matters most to them." — Stu Willis @ 00:23:48

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CHAPTERS

00:00:00 – Opening
00:00:18 – Why Final Choices?
00:03:49 – › Narrative point of view and the order of choice, decision, consequence
00:07:03 – › How withholding character decisions shapes audience perception
00:10:45 – DUNGEONS & DRAGONS
00:15:57 – › The hero's choice: want vs. need, self vs. family
00:19:09 – FINDING NEMO
00:23:30 – › Crisis decision, catharsis beats, and the anatomy of a powerful ending
00:28:45 – MICHAEL CLAYTON
00:33:26 – › The Snowpiercer moment: dramatising binary choice visually
00:40:37 – › Hero's choice made off-camera and revealed through Karen's perspective
00:48:36 – › Character arc, theme, and the cost of moral compromise
00:53:11 – PROMISING YOUNG WOMAN
00:58:28 – › Withheld plans and dramatic tension in the third act
01:05:52 – › Posthumous agency and the hero's choice after death
01:13:45 – › Logic problems and the power of cinema over narrative precision
01:16:38 – TALK TO ME
01:19:39 – › Story structure and setup of TALK TO ME
01:27:36 – › The withheld decisive act at the climax
01:35:11 – › Ambiguity versus clarity in the film's meaning
01:41:45 – Key Learnings
01:44:37 – › Setup work that empowers climactic decisions
01:50:13 – Thanks awesome patreons!

FILMS

DUNGEONS & DRAGONS: HONOR AMONG THIEVES (2023) — (w) John Francis Daley, Jonathan Goldstein, Michael Gilio (d) John Francis Daley, Jonathan Goldstein
FINDING NEMO (2003) — (w) Andrew Stanton, Bob Peterson, David Reynolds (d) Andrew Stanton, Lee Unkrich
MICHAEL CLAYTON (2007) — (w) Tony Gilroy
PROMISING YOUNG WOMAN (2020) — (w) Emerald Fennell
TALK TO ME (2022) — (w) Danny Philippou, Bill Hinzman (d) Danny Philippou, Michael Philippou

SCRIPTS

Study the script: FINDING NEMO (2003) — Andrew Stanton, Bob Peterson, David Reynolds
Study the script: MICHAEL CLAYTON (2007) — Tony Gilroy
Study the script: PROMISING YOUNG WOMAN (2020) — Emerald Fennell

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LINKS

YouTube: Michael Arndt - What makes an insanely good ending?
YouTube: Every Frame a Painting - Snowpiercer - Look Left or Right

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